Zach Selwyn
I WANT TO BE ON STARGATE ATLANTIS

One night
I couldn't keep my eyes
Open till I've turned on the [.......]
Hoping I can find a program
Now would make me stop,
My remote control was broken.
[........................................]
Made a move with my wrist,
So a great ship called ''Daedalus''.
What's this?
[......] with the craziest,
Who planned a trip to the Pegasus.
Galaxy and the show with same crease -
No fallacy, it's ''Stargate Atlantis''.
Damn! This is awesome! New space creations
Found a secret base, abandoned by the Ancients.
So Sheppard, Weir, Teyla and McKay
Joined Dex and Caldwell [......] against the Wraiths.
It's so great, I'll do anything it takes
To get me a part on the show ''StarGate''...

....Atlantis...
Exploring planets...
I'll do my tendence
To be on Stargate Atlantis

You know I'll do...

A plain alien from the distant planet
Or a robot who was old and abandoned
Has [......] kill me and leave me for dead,
Castrate me, you can chop off my head,
I complain in a moon the Athosian,
Let you know when the enemies are closing in.
It's been forty hours in American Cheyenne
They shoot in Canada a living [..................]

All my [...], give me a laser gun,
I leave them be, cover Canadian citizens (city-sun???)
Hey, another need - to make out seeing,
I'll get the crew coffee, if you know what I mean...
And every panicking
Acting with Joe Flanigan
Would [.............] on him.
Who am I? Anakin?
Can I blend in?
Cause I know I can relate,
I'll do anything to be
On the show ''StarGate''...

...Atlantis...
Exploring planets...
I'll do my tendence
To be on Stargate Atlantis

Cause e-mail ignored
Of a message board,
So, put me in the Star Gate
And let me transform,
[.............................].
Yeah, I'll show ya',
I'll give my friend mail
To Jason Momoa.
I'm a decent actor,
When it can beat the heart,
I [.....] to drop some lyrics in Asgard

[пытается петь на асгардском, которого я, к сожалению, не знаю :)))]

So, there you go,
I'll be great, I gotta wait
Just get me a part
On the show "StarGate Atlantis''...

В общем, не судите строго, я, как говорится, "не волшебник, я только учусь"... ©
P.S. Мой текст может не совпадать с текстом Зака...

и тут соответсвенно

а тут Зак вообще что-то жуткое выдал((

Добавлено (06.08.2008, 17:24:17)
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Итак, предлагаю ещё один вариант переделанного текста со всеми дополнениями:

One night
I couldn't keep my eyes
Open till I've turned on the ''Sci-Fi'',
Hoping I can find a program
Now would make me stop,
My remote control was broken.
[здесь понять всё ещё не могу... ]
Made a move with my wrist,
So a great ship called ''Daedalus''.
What's this? [......] with the craziest,
Who planned a trip to the Pegasus.
Galaxy and the show with damn* crease
No fallacy, it's ''Stargate Atlantis''.
Damn! This is awesome! New space creations
Found a secret base, abandoned by the Ancients.
So Sheppard, Weir, Teyla and McKay
Joined Dex and Caldwell off** against the Wraiths.
It's so great, I'll do anything it takes
To get me a part on the show ''StarGate'' .
_____
* слово действительно похоже на "damn".))
** to off - бить, уничтожать, оказывать сопротивление. Вполне подходит.

I'll play an alien from the distant planet
Or a robot who was old and abandoned
Has someone kill me and leave me for dead.
Castrate me, you can chop off my head,
I complain in a moon the Athosian,
Let you know when the enemies are closing in,
I've been fourteen hours in a make-up chair,
They shoot in Canada, I live and work up there.

And every panicking
Acting with Joe Flanigan
Would throw my back on him.
Who am I? Anakin?
Can I blend in?
Cause I know I can relate,
I'll do anything to be
On the show ''StarGate''...

Ваши дополнения мне очень помогли, это как свежий взгляд на проблему.
Есть какие-нибудь предложения по поводу оставшихся словосочетаний? ;))

P.S. F1, слов нет))) одни чувства)))